Hey, I like the initiative of sharing this!
One major point stood out to me. When reading CVs I try to match the statements with the experiences. I didn't manage to map them. Example: you improve processes - when and where?
Either adjust the statement to the stations or vice versa. For every statement you should have a recent backing.
The second thing is the title part: this will be very hot or miss depending on the reader. Either way I recommend putting explanation and title either in one paragraph or very close together. If this would've need on my desk and I'd be in stress I wouldn't have read beyond it just because it looked like an isolated joke going directly into the serious next block.
Hope this helps!
Lowest price on Ebay for me is 290 Euro :/ The p100 are 200 each though.
Do you happen to know if I could mix a 3700 with a p100?
And thanks for the tips!