I see what you mean now at 100%. I might have understood, before, slightly different meaning. And yes, when, for example, you are at a bar, or somewhere where they put music or pieces of art (paintaings, etc). Yes, you can see/hear and you feel whatever you feel at that moment.
Or to invite people into a new one :)
That: "such as one morning when I woke up just as the sun hit the perfect angle off a mirror and onto my eyelashes, to cause a cascade of rainbows right in my eyes. Just a few days ago I was lucky enough to enjoy a very unusual weather combination, where it was raining fairly hard at the same time as a very hot sun was in a clear part of the sky. The combination of cool rain and hot sun at the same time was very odd, but greatly enjoyable while exercising." that is something nicely written. I could really imagine the situation. You should keep going on with that thought. To write something about that.
There is more in the world, but I think [a slight derivation of the topic, sorry] we (general) do not take enough time to appreciate as we have to keep going on with our life. Maybe, just to make a small pause can help. I stop here cuz I think I will write a whole novel 😂
Indeed, you went mystic but it is refreshing :). On the "potentially forcefully and against their will" [I hope, I will express correctly ;It depends which creativity. One can still ignore the creativity of a group, of a person. Even if, then, it is everywhere. There is still free of will (generally speaking).
Regarding your last point, I think, there is always a breaking point which pushes the limits somewhere to the right direction or to the wrong, it is, I think a 50/50.
I know.. I push myself a lot not to go but it is hard as I think. I have put that moment as an enjoyable one. But no worries. I will have more work in the upcoming weeks so I will not go that so often....
It became an addiction. It helps to relax. Not a gym rat. But almost. Need to go everyday. Far away to have those extra big muscles. But the "legs day" are..... horrible.... It hurts a lot...
Thank you so much 😁
It is perfectly clear 😁
I have some work to do now...
Thank you so much. I am so happy for the feedback. First, I want to apologize for the lack of pages. When I split my PDF it showed me 20 but yeah... It counted the cover etc.
About: I’m not sure I’m going to articulate this properly, but the writing switches between narration (all knowing) and 3rd person POV a few times. What do you mean? I do not understand sorry :(
General question: Do you think it is important to know the age of the person? What I wanted to do/convey is: talking a bit less about physical trait of the characters but more about the mind, psyche of the characters. So, anyone can identify to the characters easily (if I "remove" the physical part ; including age). Maybe, it is too "conceptual".
I must admit I have hard time with Mira. I wanted her to be the adventurer type the "Let's do this ; let's go" type but also she needs to forecast things like a planner type (If I can say like that) otherwise, she panics. But not so helpless like that lol That is ok. I will rework.
For the side questions. I laughed as yeah for me it made sense but for someone else.. yeah.. maybe not.
Thank you :) A summary (if you see something bad as hell you can put it in line comment) please so it is not eating up your time. Link: https://houseofoliviereu.com/download/2617/?tmstv=1747929217 (it is in PDF) You can be a bit direct I am ok with that and ready to hear it. Thank you so much, more than appreciated.
Greetings, more will come 😺
Thank a million :) I will remember for my next books which I am writing currently (well one by one) :)